Improving blog comments

Hello blogging world. This week for our cybersmart lesson we had to pair up with another student and we had to comment in each others blogs. Once we published our comment we had to copy and paste our comment to a DLO (Digital Learning Object). Then we had to improve our comment that we wrote and we had to add a question at the end and we also had to include PTH which means positive, thoughtful and helpful. We also had to check the comment for the spelling, punctuation and grammar. We had to make sure does the comment make sense and does it convey meaning, we also had to keep the question that we wrote brief and polite. And the changes that I made were being more specific with all the sentences that I wrote and I also add a question at the end.

                                                                    Here is the DLO